The improvements and additions my lecturer told me to work on have been achieved. The feedback I received on this draft was positive. The layout was mentioned as being effective as the blue text boxes stood out and helped create a clear composition. The pages look better because they include conventional elements such as the inclusion of the writer and photographer and a note that the person being interviewed has something they want to sell, which in this case is a CD.
For my final design, I am going to take the advice of my lecturer and introduce a different font into the page, change the design of the headline and align the introductory paragraph. This will make the magazine appeal to its target audience more than it does here, especially as it will look more professional and tidy.
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