I have made changes to the colours by incorporating different shades. I have also changed the image to make the magazine appear much more professional. Another piece of feedback I have acted on is the fonts, which I have varied more and used to emphasise certain words or pieces of text.
The feedback I have received on my second draft is that the image looks like it has a low resolution, therefore I will need to take it again, but with a better camera. Also, the cutting of the image will need to be improved on the next image. It is easier to smoothly cut around the image if it is taken on a plain background. The next image will also need to be taken closer to me so that it is a medium shot. The reason for this is because my influences and deconstructions point out my intention to do this. Another piece of feedback is that the main selling line is a little unconventional and that the colour scheme stops things 'popping out'. Regarding the sell lines, my lecturer pointed out that I could use some stronger fonts'. I will also need to align the sell lines properly and make sure that the artists are focused on more to grab the readers attention more. A final point to consider was adding a subtle background colour to avoid the cover looking too stark.
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