Layout- This particular article has two columns, whereas generally three columns are used. This is so the page looks less dense and it makes it look like there is less to read. The image takes up the whole right hand side and the text is all on the left. It is easier to read because of this however. This article is unique because of its use of font and its image. When I come to designing my own double page spread, I will most likely follow the look of this one, but with some text on the second page. The design is effective as it is meant to look like a piece of school work. This is because the article looks at his ambitions to become a history teacher. The stars and skulls on the lined paper represent graffiti on a students work.
Image- The dominant image is of Corey Taylor. It tells the story of the article as he is holding letters which are presumed to be by fans. It is the largest item on the page because it easily speaks to the target audience and tells them to read the article. My image will probably not be quite as big as this one, but it will still be the stand out item of the page.
Headline- It has visual impact because of its use of colour and font. It is certainly eye catching- giving the reader a chance to see a more interesting element. This is achieved by the angle the headline is on. The first part of it is in black, but the words 'History Teacher' are in red as they are more important. The exclamation mark emphasis the surprise element of the article. I will not use surprising or shocking words, but I will still hook the reader in by using effective font, colour and layout. I want to use a linguistic feature in my headline too- such as a pun or alliteration. The headline is large and fits well because of it tilted position.
Kicker- Here, there are two paragraphs which introduce the main body of text, however there is also an introductory line. This boldly features the models name and has text below it. Both paragraphs are the kicker though, as the second part carries on from the first. Black and red is used for the kicker to make the text appear more spaced out. For me, I will follow the convention of having one full kicker and a short strapline.
Composition- It is easy to follow where everything is on these pages. All of the pieces of text are in line with each other and the image makes it apparent what the article is about. There are no pull quotes, but there is a drop cap which is in a font that differs from that of the text. I find this interesting and would highly consider using it myself. The main piece of text is on an angle, just like the headline, to give the impression of an arrow pointing to the dominant image. There is an arrow at the bottom of the second page, which leads you on to the next page. This helpful indicator is necessary to include.
Colour- The colour code is red, white and black. The white background appears to be representing a school desk. Red is a colour associated with anger, so it is effective that it has been used here, to show a rebellious school student drawing graffiti on his work. The use of black compliments the red and white. I will certainly use black text in my article to accomplish this, alongside brighter colours. There is also gold and silver on the image which connotes wealth and fame.
Narrative voice- The narrative voice is in second person. The writer describes what Corey Taylor is doing while the interview is being done- 'sits in a white walled room' and what the weather is like- 'a chilly Saturday afternoon'. When it comes to the section on fan questions, the narrative voice changes to the first person. Taylor uses humor to gain a connection to one of the fans, telling them he has 'LSD- Lead Singer's Disease'. I intend to use some humor in my article, even though not everyone will appreciate it- it will mainly be fans of the artist who connect with it.
Pace- There are mainly long sentences to set up the part where Taylor takes over. The first column is short, so the lack of sentence range does not reduce the quality of the article. I would prefer to use some short sentences to break the text up.
Language- Alliteration is used. This includes- 'Stone Sour' and 'Slipknot'. These words sound strange and fit in with the idea of 'school' as a younger audience would find them interesting. I will try to use linguistic features in my work if they fit in.
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