Preliminary task feedback

 

This feedback has helped me to understand how to make my main product look.  I now know that I will have to work on composition, image quality, fonts and colour.  My cover image needed to look more appealing, something I will keep in mind when I come to taking the pictures for my main task. My contents page on the other hand needs to have more articles listed and the layout will also need to be appropriate.  I can see why these comments have been made and I will refer back to them when designing my flat plans and my final magazine.